Adoption or re-write?

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This book is up for adoption as I said on my wall-feed

why? I lost motivation and the plot seems rather stupid. So I might as well leave it to the hands of another who can tell the story better.

the main plot was for phil to be a dad and step down for a new-gen to take over and some conflict on who will watch over the country along while figure out why and how the kids were even made and came to be

I also wanted this to be an amephil because this revolves around allies and/or packs and these 2 have had a complicated relationship so it was my obvious pick, why not rusame you ask? It's way more complicated and I don't study history that much.

also, the reason why the kids exist was because they manifest from specific and significant objects, for example; japan gives an apology locket to S.korea, S.korea holds it dear to them so much attaching it to their old memories and emotions.

the kids' physical age depends on which party that wields the object decides, whether it's purposefully or not. so basically the kids are like a living contract/Alliance/Pack. but they can also disappear/die if the alliance of both parties r broken. but unless the pack has existed for more than 30 decades they may(or may not) still live, but they will be weak when starting on their own so they have to still rely on one of the country leaders

So now that I'm back into writing and have at least gotten better, would you want me to re-write, or do you want to adopt this book. If you've written a book of your own before then I can trust you

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