Sorry wrote the name of your book name wrong its his unmarked territory.
Hi Guys. I'm Back! I've just posted a new chapter to Claiming California. https://www.wattpad.com/11002028-claiming-california-chapter-1-free-falling-bird Please check it out and tell me what you think. On another note I am working on a new chapter of Undiscovered Territory too. Trix (AKA xxRandomxThoughtsxx)
hey i just wanted to say i am about half way throught your book your marked territory and i just want to I love the whole story and the concept of the book. I have read tons of werewolf books and this book is really publish worthy if you re write this book with more depth and explainations. It really has very good base story. This book has everything which binds me to read it wanting to know whats gonna happen next. But you have to make somethings more clear in it. First the whole klaus being americas most powerful aplha and Sky her mate so has to be same amount of powerful. I dont see the power anywhere except when he orders around people for petty things. It has to be bigger then that. Second bind the situation more clearly and make charachter focus on more pressing matters like klaus getting worried about Weslyes kidnapping/dissappearance. Third deffinetly good chances of brother bonding(bromance) and there combined powers. Them being twins. everyone likes good bromance. (atleast I do) With some changes you can make a trilogy out of it. Your story has the same depths as Quinn loftis's books just a little writing issues it is a good book.
IS claiming california going to start up again? Is she still an active writer? Is the book on hold or is she just done??
Are you going to repost Run With Me?
Are you going to update undiscovered territory soon?
Could you maybe make a third book I love them so much is like to see where the rest of the story line could go your so talented and these could go to be a published series one day
So, I've read your books "His Unmarked Territory" and "His Undiscovered Territory" and I just wanted to know if there was a way you could get this published. I read them back when I was in high school and I fell in love. I just wanted to know if there was a way I could obtain a hard copy, or if your books would stay online.
Please stop partnering with Wattpad to put ads on your stories it ruins the experience a lot :/
When will you update Claiming California? I really enjoyed the book so far and I hope you write more! I love your type of writing and I know what I reading right away. It's not like books that there plot is confusing it's straight forward. I like the mystery in Vincent and how she is her own person and she's unique. Please update a I'll be waiting for a update! Keep on writing I love it and I can agree to say many people would agree with me...
I came back to reread the undiscovered territory books since I first read them when you wrote them. I know you have a life outside of this but I and other fans do wish you hadn't removed Run With Me as well as I'm sure we wish you would complete the series for us... much love and I hope you are able to revisit these soon ❤❤❤