@just_vibing_dude yo this is a really late reply and I'm sorry (didn't see it till now ha) but thanks for the advice. Its something I have actually picked up and implemented into my newer work. Nevertheless, thank you.
@ rosehatakethehusky Don't worry it's not anything to bad I'm not here to drag you
But it's a little hard to read because there's barely space between the sentences. Like 3-5 sentences per alinea is enough but everything in one piece gets really draining to read and you will miss all the details people won't take the time to read your story.
I did however like the story itself, character development etc as it is going now (I'm not finished yet) but you might want to edit some space in there
@rosehatakethehusky that's so exciting!! I'm so happy for you!! Plus, I don't really think you need to apologize about an update speed, every knows that everyone else has a life outside Wattpad, or at least they should. Your health and mental wellbeing come first!