rosehatakethehusky

Yooo 300 followers? Im honestly honored you guys like my stuff. I can't promise anything, my motivation's been bad recently, but you might see an update from me as appreciation !!

just_vibing_dude

Hi I hope you don't mind some feedback on ur kiribaku fanfic?

rosehatakethehusky

@just_vibing_dude yo this is a really late reply and I'm sorry (didn't see it till now ha) but thanks for the advice. Its something I have actually picked up and implemented into my newer work. Nevertheless, thank you.
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just_vibing_dude

@ rosehatakethehusky  Don't worry it's not anything to bad I'm not here to drag you
            
            But it's a little hard to read because there's barely space between the sentences. Like 3-5 sentences per alinea is enough but everything in one piece gets really draining to read and you will miss all the details people won't take the time to read your story.
            
            I did however like the story itself, character development etc as it is going now (I'm not finished yet) but you might want to edit some space in there
            
            Like this:)
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rosehatakethehusky

I appreciate all the comments you guys leave on my fics! I read each and every one of them, and some of them are down right hilarious

rosehatakethehusky

Sorry for the slow updating on the Obey Me fics! Ive got a series in the drafts that I'm really excited for!

pharmgirl147

@rosehatakethehusky that's so exciting!! I'm so happy for you!! Plus, I don't really think you need to apologize about an update speed, every knows that everyone else has a life outside Wattpad, or at least they should.  Your health and mental wellbeing come first!
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rosehatakethehusky

The obey me quarentine fic is official! I'm starting off with Belphagor, but if you have any requests for a quarentine fic with one of the brothers, ask away!