poisoned_pen

Hey y'all! Just wondering if anyone would be willing to give me feedback on a short story? I had to write one for university and it's due tomorrow but I'm not 100% happy with it. x

Gwizidor

Good for you! Self doubt is the worst enemy of a writer. But it can help to have someone else read your work (I often leave important details out of my writing because I know them so it doesn’t occur to me that they are important to mention) if you need a proofreader I’ll be happy to help!
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poisoned_pen

@Gwizidor thank you so much but I actually decided to just hand it in, I need to be a bit more confident in my own abilities haha. Thanks again! x
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Gwizidor

I can if you like
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JennnADavis

It seems like you've been MIA for a while. I hope all is well. I just finished reading Citizen and wanted to let you know how much I loved reading your story. Your descriptions are some of the best that I've come across on Wattpad. 
          
          Just wanted to see if you still planned on posting a sequel. 
          
          I wish you all the best. Thank you.

mikaisloved

Thanks for the follow, fellow writer! I never got to say this but I love your book Citizen.

mikaisloved

You are a really talented writer! Your book citizen is just so good that I read it at midnight when it's tough to fall asleep! Keep up the good work author!!
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poisoned_pen

Aw thank you!! I’m glad you like it ☺️
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

Hey! It's been a while since we've chatted. How're you doing? :)

poisoned_pen

@Midnight_Kaiulanis whoops and I only just saw your reply XD we’re really not great at this hahah 
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

@poisoned_pen OOPS I never saw your reply! I've been good too. Just realized I still haven't finished reading 'Citizen'! I'll be doing that tomorrow or Thursday. :D
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poisoned_pen

Hey! I haven’t had any time to write lately so I’ve been MIA in here but I’m pretty good. How are you? :)) 
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poisoned_pen

Hey y'all! Just wondering if anyone would be willing to give me feedback on a short story? I had to write one for university and it's due tomorrow but I'm not 100% happy with it. x

Gwizidor

Good for you! Self doubt is the worst enemy of a writer. But it can help to have someone else read your work (I often leave important details out of my writing because I know them so it doesn’t occur to me that they are important to mention) if you need a proofreader I’ll be happy to help!
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poisoned_pen

@Gwizidor thank you so much but I actually decided to just hand it in, I need to be a bit more confident in my own abilities haha. Thanks again! x
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Gwizidor

I can if you like
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