How goes it, gushi?
Jagged Edges - Chapter 1trulyness · 35 Parts
This was an interesting first chapter! I like how you used the conversation between Juliette and Nicole to introduce the main cast of the story. Nicole has already caught my interest as a distinct, headstrong character as a result of your use of dialogue to show her characterization, and that's impressive for just the first chapter! I also liked the rapport between the two girls and am interested in how their friendship will contribute to the story, and good job on adding in little details (like Aaron's being the writer of one of Nicole's favorite songs) to get us interested in the other characters, as well! Good luck with the rest of your story! :)