njhahmad_

THANK YOU FOR 3 MILLIONS READER ON HIS BIGGEST MISTAKE!!! I DO REALLY APPREACIATE AND WILL MAKE IT A BETTER BOOK.

SaraGarcia2009

Will you be making a short story of how she comes out from Wrong Turn? And kids?
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MrFunnyBones9

Hi.  There are a few thing I want to point out which are wrong with your preview. First is " she always makes herself busy with work , work and work."
          It's wrong , you just have to write work once and if you want to emphasize then write it in bold or italics.  Next is " good looking face". Instead of writing that write good looks . Next "When Joseph going to open" , it will be when "Joseph decides  to open" or something like that. Your sentence is grammatically wrong. Next , instead of "gonna incharge " , write "gonna be incharge" . Next " days by days " will be "day by day". And the last , "didn't want " will be " doesn't want" 
          
          Thanks

MrFunnyBones9

@MrFunnyBones9 
            It's from the book His Interior Designer 
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