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midnight101 commented on Worlds Apart - Chapter Twenty Six


"You can have sing all the pretty songs you want, but I'm not going to hate myself for you. I've been there, done that, got bored."
midnight101
This is the line you put on tumblr. Wow you're an amazing writer. I honestly can't believe you wrote all of this so quickly it's so amazing.
midnight101 commented on Worlds Apart - Chapter Twenty-Five


midnight101
This chapter was definitely intense. It was so long and I was in love. I love Cam and Jude and their giant toxic relationship. They are both so messed up and sometimes they can fix each other but most times they destroy each other and I love every minute of it. I love Logan and it's painful to see that he is in love with Jude but at the same time I know Jude has some feelings for him but at the same time if she ever went over a line anything between her and cam would be over. 
      
      I loved this chapter it was long and beautifully written and it made me very very happy so thank you so much.


midnight101
so instead of me actually paying attention in school i just spent every waking moment trying to find ways to sneakily read this book. I also had this really giant smile on my face all day because in my mind I was screaming SETH AND KEELY SETH AND KEELY AHHHHHHHHH, yeah it was bad. 
      
      This chapter was unbelievably  good and I know I say that about every chapter but every chapter just gets better and better. Also every time you update (I always get it when I just wake up I don't know why) I immediately get really excited and tell my friends (even though only one of them is currently reading the story so she understands my pain and excitement) but this has been going on for a year of so they're used to it. 
      
      But back to the chapter
      
      The interview killed me. I loved all the libertine lyrics (I really got into them after reading the chapter with music when the lights go out) and just the way they were joking and laughing and just really getting to know each other just made me so happy. 
      
      I also just want to start off by saying that I like Nick but I don't like him with Keely. I mean I think he has really affected her and helped her get out of the post spears rut she was in, I also think that he is good for her and that they love each other to a point. Their relationship is on the rocks and if they break up Keely's going to be destroyed but I think she's strong enough to get back up I mean she's Keely Staub. 
      
      I just can't help but feel that Seth and Keely are meant to be together, they just fit so well and even though they can't go back (haha get it) I feel like maybe if they honestly worked on it they can learn from what they had and go on and dominate. Honestly if Seth and Keely get back together and they actually move on but learn from what happened (this is actually my dream) they would dominate. They would be so powerful with music and not even their on music but music in general like they could produce and help people and just be amazing together. 
      
      Bur also another part of me is saying that they're relationship is toxic (but I'm a sucker for those) and they would just drive themselves mad. But the bigger part says that this could be good they just need to learn from their mistakes. 
      
      Alright so onto the other parts of the story. Jay and Toby are great just as great as I remember and I'm so glad that they came back. I love the interaction with Seth I thought it was awful and in my head I thought he would say something like "Yeah I know how loud she could be" but he didn't and they got over it which was good because Keely doesn't need that. 
      
      The last scene when Seth sang the song I felt so many different things. I mean I've listened to that song dozens of time so you would think I would get the drift but when he sang it to Keely i was just like ahhhhhhh what does it all mean. I'm hoping it just means that he wants them to grow and just be good again and that he loves her always. 
      
      And the very last scene I think the person is Maureen at least I'm hoping it's her.
      
      So thanks for the update it made my whole month and I will be anxiously waiting for the next one. 
      
      I'm also super sorry this comment is so long I'm typing it on my phone and I'm just so happy and excited about the chapter!