Baby_Treasure3

Thanks for reading my book... give me feedback what do you think?

Baby_Treasure3

Would you believe me if I told you over half of the story I wrote while I was dog sick with food poisoning I felt bad that I hadn’t updated in forever so I went ahead and updated the final chapters. Thank you for your critiques I do plan on rewriting it and filling in some of the blanks once I finish the current book I’m working on. I’m writing this one first then uploading chapters on a schedule since I had difficulty staying on track with the previous one. I hope you read it once it’s up I could use your honest feedback
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manimani620

You’re so welcome!!!!! I loved the book, there were some holes in the plot, but I really didn’t mind the book still was good. I loved the plot. In the end before the twins came back I cried a little. Overall this was a good book.
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