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Gah, what's Danny trying to do?   Dang it, it's better he waits another ten years before seriously pursuing her?
      Anyway, spelling error 
      1.  should be break up, and not brake up
      2. not sure whether it's a US english spelling - traveled.  More familiar with UK english - travelled

A bit of grammatical error at "Everyone stopped in there tracks.  Should be "their" tracks.  Anyway, great chapter.  Love how the story is progressing.  Naturally Elizabeth would have a breakdown, too bad she was feeling too vulnerable to slap Danny.  Good job, Randi.