I'm just out here, chasing the meth-like high of people saying "hey this isn't completely terrible" about things I have written. 

More importantly, though, I am also a BOMB.ASS.CRITIQUER. My writing's middling at best, but editing? That's my calling, bro. So if you need someone to fix your commas or help you scrape your heavier scenes into something coherent shoot me a PM and I'll see what I can do.

The only thing I ask is that you give my writing at least a shot if I am providing critique for you. For one, I'm a writer too and, as such, very needy for attention. More importantly, though, it gives you an idea what kind of writer I am and what my strengths and weaknesses are so you know what items of feedback you should take with a grain of salt. If you read a couple chapters and hate it, feel free to peace out. I will not be butthurt. But do please at least try.
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lptvorik lptvorik Jun 28, 2019 12:29AM
I thought I already posted this but it disappeared? I'm writing a new thing now. It's not much good, but I know I'll be able to finish it so that's a plus. If you're in the mood for some of my tradem...
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