Ok, so I like reading. Kind of obvious since I'm on here, but I just thought I'd make it clear.
So if you have any books you want feedback for, I'd be happy to help. Just one thing - I am honest with my feedback, so if you can't take it, don't ask for it.

I also love writing, as you can probably guess from the collection of stories down there.
So, it'd mean a lot to me if you took a few minutes and gave them a look. I completely welcome feedback, I love advice on how to be a better writer and how to improve my stories.

If you're ever bored and don't mind insane people, leave a comment - I don't bite (much).

Muchos love if you're nice, get off my page if you're not
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gempearl gempearl Jul 13, 2012 07:29PM
@ReneeRodriguez_143 what red X where? I wasn't trying to hurt you, I just really think you need an editor or to learn some grammar. I was being honest. I wasn't going to read it and comment "omg dis...
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