Ahsokafan45

here's no turning back after you start reading this trust me this will put a smile on your face. Every night , someone thinks about you before they go to sleep. At least fifteen people in this world love you. The only reason someone would ever hate you is because they want to be just like you. There are at least two people in this world. That which would --- for you and those which would not. You mean the world to someone. Someone that you don't even know exists loves❤ you. When you make the biggest mistake ever, something good comes from it. When you think the world has turned its back on you, take a look. Always remember the compliments you've received. Forget the rude remarks. So if you are a loving friend, send this to 15 people including the person that sent it to you. (a.k.a) Me. Something good will happen to you between 12 in the morning and 4 o'clock pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere . Get ready for the biggest shock in your life. If you break this chain YOU will be cursed ⚡with relationship problems for the next 20 years. Send this to fifteen people in fifteen minutes. Make Someone else's day. Help get a smile on someone's face! Help someone out! remember that your loved. F.R.I.E.N.D.S. =Fight for you =Respect you =Involve =Encourage you =Need you =Deserve you =Save you. Send this to all your friends & me if I'm one If you get 4 back u r liked but if u get 7 ur loved. If you get all 15 back your the best.

Ahsoka1708

Paste this ✨ on ten ✨ nice people's ✨ profiles and ✨ if you ✨ get ten ✨ back you ✨ really are ✨ special

Ally07051

Hi! Thank you so much for your valuable feedback it really means a lot to me and it is very informative. I will definately make the necessary changes to it. I know that there is a lot for me to improve as English is not my first language. 
          
          Also, I read your book. It is really good and I love how it depicts strong women characters perfectly. I would love to read more. :)

Ally07051

Thank you! I will definately ask for your review for further chapters when I publish them. But first I have to rework on the chapters I already published. 
            I know talking in english and writing it are two really different things.
            
            My Pleasure. Your book is wonderfull and I would be doing a lot more comments on the upcoming chapters.
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dieFabuliererin

@Ally07051 thanks for letting me give feedback on your book! English is a difficult language to get the hang of and even I make mistakes at times! Please, let me know if you want me to review any more chapters :)
            
            Thanks for your lovely comments on my book!!
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EscapetheHorizon73

Thank you for the votes on Alpha Female!  

EscapetheHorizon73

@dieFabuliererin you’re welcome ! I wanted her to be a bit different than most female characters! Don’t get me wrong, I love those type books, but I really wanted to do something a little different! And take your time ! I just appreciate the reads :) 
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dieFabuliererin

@EscapetheHorizon73 thanks for writing such a great female character in a werewolf book! I'll get round to reading the rest- I was just super busy today
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