hi! i just finished reading your story "mine forever" for the second time. and even if i've read it before, i still experienced the suspense you've created, most especially when scarlet was kidnapped and the scene with vince. it's just too bad that vince turned that way, which was precisely what his mother tried to avoid. the way you described scarlet seemed to be unrealistic. she was just too good to be true. when alexander was yelling at her and pointing out her mistakes so rudely, she just apologized and told him it won't happen again. you were able to show alexander being truly in love with cherry but all he got in return was betrayal. you successfully depicted that the feeling that alexander felt for scarlet was the real thing, which he did not feel with cherry in his povs. what i am glad is that you did not include bedroom scenes and just stated that they made love. although you may brand me as being a prude, i still firmly believe that such scenes, should be kept between the two lovers and it would be better for the reader to use their imagination. that is the reason why reading books are more interesting than watching a story that was scripted into a movie. anyway, i was really surprised when i looked into your list of work. it was only "mine forever." i do sincerely hope that you will find time to show your God given talent in writing in the future. good luck.
