arabellainblue

ps, i removed lee asking noah to choose (when they were fighting after jaces confession) bc as much as i love angst and suffering lmao, i feel like hes too mellow and kind to do that, even if his feelings were hurt badly. also didnt want people to hate lee bc hes the sweetest :D

CriticalArcher

@arabellainblue I also hated that people in the comments were hating on Lee. It made no sense, could they not understand how hurt he was?
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CriticalArcher

wow, that’s so weird to know you removed that because it’s like the “original draft” will always be spoken about when Lee said that. I wasn’t mad at him, I understood where he was coming from and even the BEST people and the KINDEST people can turn different when they feel really hurt. But in all honesty, i think this was a good choice !!!
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no_loser

@arabellainblue thank you! I did not like that part it was way to much for me
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arabellainblue

ps, i removed lee asking noah to choose (when they were fighting after jaces confession) bc as much as i love angst and suffering lmao, i feel like hes too mellow and kind to do that, even if his feelings were hurt badly. also didnt want people to hate lee bc hes the sweetest :D

CriticalArcher

@arabellainblue I also hated that people in the comments were hating on Lee. It made no sense, could they not understand how hurt he was?
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CriticalArcher

wow, that’s so weird to know you removed that because it’s like the “original draft” will always be spoken about when Lee said that. I wasn’t mad at him, I understood where he was coming from and even the BEST people and the KINDEST people can turn different when they feel really hurt. But in all honesty, i think this was a good choice !!!
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no_loser

@arabellainblue thank you! I did not like that part it was way to much for me
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arabellainblue

ok so: do u guys want chapter 39 (bluejay), or do u want a little break with a side story bonus chapter (i cant tell u what its about but yeah)

sssmutlover

if it’s side story w leegene i want it first dkdjdk
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no_loser

@arabellainblue chapter 39 but I dont mind if you do a side story its really up to you.
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123QueerMess456

@arabellainblue side story with euegen and lee?
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tikva8

i’m so far behind in tangled up in blue, it hurts. but i’m On my way! to binge read it now hehe & i just wanted to say hi hello :’)

arabellainblue

@tikva8 ahhhh just grateful to have u bb! <333 hope u enjoy
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reallyyrae

@tikva8 omg it's so ggood i wish i was back to the beginning so i could rebinge it again cry you're so lucky cherish the feeling of being a ftr because it'll be gone once you reread it </3
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karialiceeee

its been a day since i read the new chapter AND IM STILL???? NOT??? FUNCTIONING??? CORRECTLY???? 
          
          also you ARE a very good writer. never forget that :(( i hope you’re doing okayyyyy

arabellainblue

@karialiceeee thank u so much bb ur the cutest, have a virtual hug from me :*))
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karialiceeee

and the people leaving hate comments on your story can go step on legos <3
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arabellainblue

the negative comments on my book are really getting me down?? ik most of them are lovely but like... why comment criticism when someone is writing a book for free just so other people can enjoy it?? it's wattpad it's gonna be cringe and cliche it's not meant to be perfect, and i can take constructive critiscm but?? someone got mad at me for writing so many bj scenes but BRUH theres only so much smut you can do without actual sex :D it's really hard and im already super self conscious about everything i write, im 17 and trying my best pls just be nice <3

Hinydd

Sorry for the length of the comment lmao xD
            (I wrote another comment adding an emoji but it didn't show and the comment seemed too serious so I'm using xD instead plz ignore that)
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Hinydd

@ arabellainblue  Don't be shy give us the names and I'll have a nice conversation with them  
            
            Seriously though, I think you're doing great sweetie ❣ Sadly it's inevitable that there are going to be people who either just don't know how to express their opinion/critique on someone's work respectfully, or they simply want to spread negativity. In my eyes this platform, despite its flaws, is a place where people can enjoy something together and share their thoughts on it. It's supposed to give everyone the chance to write and enjoy themselves as they do so, and no one should expect for every story on WattPad to be a professionally written masterpiece of literature. If you don't enjoy the story leave. Simple. It happened to me that at one point of a story I stopped being interested, but I never left a comment to bring down the author. I just stopped reading and that's it. Just because I didn't finish my journey, it doesn't mean that I have to ruin everyone else's.
            
            Also, being 22 and someone who would like to learn more about writing, I really like your work so far and I'm thoroughly impressed! Maybe my word isn't of much value but I think that if a story makes you excited and curious to read it, then the author did a good job. And that's exactly your case! In conclusion, I can imagine how you must feel about some of the comments, but try to focus only on the positive ones and on all the good feelings you yourself have about your story. That's also very important. Of course you're gonna have insecurities about your work, but at the same time you know how much effort you're putting into it and that alone should make you very proud! To quote a random business book I found in my step father's office (I'm using it to place my cup of tea when I'm lying on the bed now lmfao) "quality creates self esteem, and self esteem is the basis of quality" 
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mainhbic

i bully people. who’s being rude.
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