ugh ur writing is spectacular TRULY! And I'm sad that you don't get as much recognition as you deserve (๑˃̵^˂̵)
Hi there! I started reading your story “White Lie” awhile back and I really wanted to do more than leave a comment so here I am. I don’t usually come on Wattpad very often unless I’m already deep into a story but your book is something that I check every time I log on. I think your writing style is really unique compared to a lot of other people on this cite. I believe you treat each of your works as if it is a book, not a story. You more of an author than a writer. You create this beautiful and complex plot which you surround with intricate words and characters. The elements of your writing style are super well rounded and complete. You are able to create characters that are equally good and bad which i find really refreshing and unique. In “White Lie” the main character is just as much the protagonist as they are their own antagonist. You create flaws and you don’t make the character to please anyone else, you make the character to be a part of your writing. I’m also not sure if you’re doing this on purpose but the way you target your audience is done really well. You write in a relatable way but not to the extreme that it isn’t digestible. The way you describe things and justify actions mimic actual thought processes that people may have. Instead of making all of the characters throw themselves at one person you provide interactions where real emotional discoveries can be made. I really enjoy that I can tell the difference between things characters cause and things that just happen because of some external force. Apologies for analyzing a bunch and just gushing in general but I thought it would be really important for you to know that you’re doing everything right. If you ever need someone to edit or brainstorm with let me know and I would jump on the opportunity as soon as I opened Wattpad. Thanks for taking the time to read all of this!
Haha, no, yeah, of course! I’m glad I could provide such positive feelings and feedback. If I’m being honest I tried my best to come up with a critique because I find they can be really helpful but I genuinely struggled to do so! You write very very well and I truly hope you are proud of your works. Again, if you ever need anything, I’d be more than happy to help, though I don’t think you need much of it. Thanks for taking the time to not only respond so thoughtfully but also be so thankful!
Wow! Thank you so much for this message—it made me smile lots :,)) I’m so glad you enjoy my work! I just—wow. I don’t know what to say—which is why it took me so long to reply, btw. Sorry about that. But your words are so kind and sincere and I am so so grateful that you took the time to leave such a long message! I do try to create works of literature, not just stories, and I’m happy you enjoy it! I don’t think I’m quite there yet, but it’s nice to know you think my writing style is good :,) honestly, white lie is super self indulgent. I love the man vs himself theme and I’ve never not written anything without it, lol To think that someone took the time to sit and analyze my work really makes me all fuzzy inside! Thank you so much for going so in-depth with the characters, too. I love, love, love characters, and I try to add as much depth as I can to them. All of my stories are explorations of characters, and I’m glad you caught on! Thank you, thank you, thank you for all of your kind words. I don’t think I’m that great, haha, but I’m glad you enjoy what I can offer, and I’ll definitely do my best to improve! Thank you, too, for your offer to be an editor—but I think you’d probably die of annoyance with my terrible writing and schedule. I just kinda write when I want to, and my current editor always pinches me because I’m so inconsistent, lol Thank YOU for taking the time to analyze and write all of this! It warms my heart to know people are truly enjoying my work. And don’t worry, leaving a simple comment is more than enough! Even a single vote tells me that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for enjoying my book!
hI- just so you know your stories are amazing and ilysm
Hi!! I just wanted to say that your book 'white lie' is super amazing. It has a unique plot and backstory, and I just cant wait to read more!! Its definitely one of my favourite BNHA fanfiction, and I look forward to another update! You've probably sen similar messages from other readers, but I just wanted you know how much I enjoy your books. XD♡
Hello! Thanks so much for your kind words. It doesn’t matter how many of these I get, I reread each and every one of them all the time and love them more and more. I’m glad you think that about my book :,) that’s a creator’s best happiness, I think, to know your viewers enjoy your work as much as you enjoy making it. Thank you for taking the time to sit down and type out a message this long :,) these things really make my day, you know! I’m so sorry about my extremely sporadic update schedule - even so, I hope I can keep you intrigued with my works. :3
your stories are written so well!! the characters that you've made are crafted so beautifully, the use of vocabulary makes everything fit well together and there's always that awaited twist which makes the story so much more compelling. beautiful. so glad i found you and your works! keep up the great work and take care ♡ (i don't really do this much, but i just had to ><)
oH no brain cells are kinda important I’m sorry for doing this to you Thank you thank you for reading and enjoying my books :,))) and for also taking the time to write this. I’m glad - my intention is always to make a reader sit back and reflect, so it makes me happy to know that it’s working! I’m glad you found me too! I hope you stay for the rest of this story :D
Hellooo :)) I just found your book, white lie and I LOVE IT. At first I was confused because the reader was so conflicting to read about in the first few chapters but when I read the other chapters, it made so much more sense. Your book is just so well written. I'm really looking forward to what happens next! Thank you so much for the wonderful story
let’s just take a moment and appreciate dusty1190. your stories are amazing oh my god :00 i send you some love and appreciation ** uwu
just read ur other book, "constant" and man do I wish I'm as cool as the reader in that story *insert laughing crying face here* And only 68 followers? You're very underrated, because each of your stories are so well thought out-characters, plot, the meanings-everything! It's rare to find such good reads which are consistent in quality with each chapter with meanings that you can tell have taken a lot of time to think up and write. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read future updates (I know school's one hella offa salty bitch for neglecting it all summer and leeches of your time before I can spontaneously burst into stress induced tears so take ur time!) just wanted to tell u u have all of my support. k bye now I'll see myself out
@dusty1190 np bae! u deserve it honestly-don't put yourself down! your two stores are a hecka lot more amazing than u think they are! I! Am! Using! Too many! Exclamation points!
@PineappleMochi wait no come back i'll see u out it's impolite if i don't-- ??? thank you so much????? sjkadh 50+ followers is amazing to me honestly i'm surprised why anyone would even want to follow me ;-; trust me, my stories aren;t as great as you make them out to be i just spit out junk to my computer and it uploads it lmao though i am very very very very happy you enjoy my stories! hell yeah school is actually satan i am dyinG what is free time (i really should update more ahsj) thank you so much for your support im gonna cry i love u all
hi fam!! I'm sorry for bothering you right now!! but I was just wondering, i was inspired by your story white lie and I wanted to write something similar? like another hero school in another country! thats all, I'm not trying to steal your idea lol k bye!!!
Omg! I know that WEBTOON! I’ve been trying to look for it but I can’t seem to find it!! Do you mind telling me the name again?