Tyhond

Chapter 20 of Midnight Zenith is here, please enjoy! :D
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nonexistentweirdo

Deicide to write it here! I see a few problems with the story, you need pov a bit and study in dialogue as well, the bio shouldn't show almost half your story in it, it woke give away your story a bit too quickly

Tyhond

@nonexistentweirdo Thank you, that was informative :3
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nonexistentweirdo

I'm not really a writer so I have no idea why you asked me
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nonexistentweirdo

Dw, I'm nor sure if your still learning on how get a hold of your story but it's really great so far
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