Tishi-chan

So, I am reading my dear Mystic Messenger book and...I read so many stories and I put them in categories of how good they are. I would definitely not put my story on the good list. It's cliché, the plot is going a bit too fast and it's forced so....I am still proud of it though 

Tishi-chan

Every. Single. Paragraph. With. Saeran. Or. MC. Has. At lest. One. Comment. From. Muffin. Every single one of them 
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Tishi-chan

Okay. Some parts are funny. I feel proud of those parts. It made me laugh. And also, I guess this was a way to get my ego a bit higher. They talk about perfection with my character just sounds really egoistic
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Tishi-chan

So, I am reading my dear Mystic Messenger book and...I read so many stories and I put them in categories of how good they are. I would definitely not put my story on the good list. It's cliché, the plot is going a bit too fast and it's forced so....I am still proud of it though 

Tishi-chan

Every. Single. Paragraph. With. Saeran. Or. MC. Has. At lest. One. Comment. From. Muffin. Every single one of them 
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Tishi-chan

Okay. Some parts are funny. I feel proud of those parts. It made me laugh. And also, I guess this was a way to get my ego a bit higher. They talk about perfection with my character just sounds really egoistic
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Tishi-chan

Anyone knows an execution for the Ultimate Hypnotizer? I can't really think of anything 

cIoudedskies

@Tishi-chan No problem! <3
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Tishi-chan

@cIoudedskies thank you. It's really useful. I won't make it completely the same but I'll take the inspiration. Thank you ^^
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cIoudedskies

-them, faster and faster until metal made contact with flesh. The sickening sound of bone breaking was heard, and the surviving students barely had time to react before the axe's remaining momentum swung the lifeless body back into the shadows, leaving just as fast as it had entered. 
            
            (2/2)
            
            also i just realized i didnt include a name for this excecution- whoops! 0-0
            
            um i hope this is useful to you and you like it! if not then i hope you'll be able to take inspiration from it and create an excecution more suited to your tastes.
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