SweetNovember48

Hello All. I would like to thank you for looking at my work. I am seeking any type of feedback from grammar, punctuation, form and structure.  I am open to all types of critique. 
Like a lot of people who write, writing has been a passion of mine since I first gripped a crayon/pencil.  I have written as a form of creativity from a very young age.  I write poetry and novels.  I have also written non-fiction. There is truly no genre that I won't write as long as the story line is inspiring.
I have raised three brilliant daughters to adulthood and still support two in college.  I have a young son who is the light of my life. I also work full time as a Director of HR.
I have three completed novels/books and three children's books.  I have found that seeking representation has been more difficult than I thought it would be even though I was realistic that it would be hard work.  I want to make a career of writing.  I feel that I have the desire and devotion to seeing these book through to publication. I just need some input and guidance.
Please feel free to give your feedback as it is greatly appreciated.  Whether you love it, hate it, find it mediocre or think it is worth continuing on, I am very thankful for your time and effort.