Please, especially if you hate my work, comment. I want to know exactly WHY you hate it, so I can improve it. I don't get offended by harsh criticism.
I don't usually do posts like this, but PLEASE check out the_day_of_abandon and Akea13. They're amazing poets; it'll definately be worthwhile.
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