HI I'M EM I'M 18 BUT A LOT OF THESE STORIES I WROTE WHEN I WAS A BIT YOUNGER 

I love reading as much as I dig writing, and one of the best ways to discover stories is checking out yours, so hit me up for a critique!

There's 2 conditions to get a critique from me.

1. Payment -- leave some meaty feedback on a chapter of my new story, Comprachicos, or if that's not your thing then on a chapter of Terms & Conditions.

2. Expect the critique to be honest! The idea is for me to help your writing if possible, not stroke your lil ego. :)

much love xoxox
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LizzyLouLou LizzyLouLou Jun 12, 2015 11:19AM
@Jenniferpeace aw thank you! Feedback is always appreciated :) 
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