Please give me feedback on my writing and stories thanks!

About me:
I'm a giant nerd that loves reading (wow wouldn't have thought that) I solve rubiks cubes (not from the rubiks brand cause they suck) I actualy kind of like math once I understand it. I love music and drawing, I play ukulele and a little bit guitar, I mosly just lay in my bed all day and watch youtube or netflix or somethin...
The music that I like is mostly the following:
Twenty one pilots
Fall out boy
panic! At the disco
my chemical romance
arctic monkeys
The beatles
the who
the palms (probably no one knows them cause they're really small but if you read this please look them up cause they are amazing and soooo underrated!)
The 1975
lana del rey
billie eilish
Grace vanderwaal
Pink floyd
David Bowie
Green day
Declan Mckenna
The Neighbourhood

And so much more of wich I can't think right now.

Also I love series like these:
Doctor who
Stranger things
the flash
the arrow
rick and morty
Walking dead
Breaking bad
the end of the f***ing world
everything sucks
Dc's legends of tomorrow
Peaky blinders

Something like that I guess...

I also have a band in wich I play ukulele, it's called Vanished, but don't bother looking it up yet cause we haven't made any music yet anyway and I will change this bio when we have.

I write some books on here and I appreciate you checking them out, some parts I wrote quite a while ago, so I'm not verry proud of those, but if you get to like the 3th chapter, you'll be good.
Also I might change some things in those parts that I hate.

I hope someone liked reading those books or something... I don't know.
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  • JoinedFebruary 17, 2018

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