Hey. Thanks got them. When will book 2 of Crimson Wars be available?
Strange World: Grimoire (book 1) - CH00 - TerminalJakeAshStrife · 42 Parts
Thanks for the feedback. :) This is a prologue, so I didn't put as much in as I should've. I'll likely revise it with everyone's feedback. I loosely based this around a visit to a hospital I had, without my illness actually being terminal, and the parents are how my parents would act. That theme remains consistent when we see the 'real' world in this book. I wanted to start the book with a sharp sting, since I like to jump right into the story, but I realize I made us care less about the MC. I also didn't mention the name of the illness or his name because I wanted the reader to feel like it could be them in this situation.
Strange World: Grimoire (book 1) - CH01 - Magna-RachaJakeAshStrife · 42 Parts
Thank you for your feedback. :) This chapter is actually 2,400 words long. I always aim for between 2,000 to 2,500 words. I think it's just my writing style that makes it seem shorter, perhaps.
Keep Calm and Write On - Week 27: July 10-17MaeveSiverling · 30 Parts
Done. (thanks for the reminder @Maevesiverling) I'll answer favorite world building elements. I love this lore about the Dark. Especially how there might be a scientific explanation about it. I know someone mentioned the Animatrix and how we blackened our own skies. I also thought of that. I wonder if we, as humans, had something to do with the Dark emerging, or if it is some kind of illusion. The Dark is a threatening, and quite frightening thing. I really want to read more soon. This remains one my favorites in the club. @Wintersleep85