Indigo_Not_Blue

I’m looking for feedback! So in your spare time could you look at this? https://www.wattpad.com/story/212766122

penjamin24seven365

@WEIRDO-DORITO the formating is a bit weird on Wattpad so there's something with that that might turn others off. 
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penjamin24seven365

@WEIRDO-DORITO I liked it but it's a bit too little to really tell if I would love it but I'm sure there will be another chapter to really see what's going on and get to know Alice a bit more
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Indigo_Not_Blue

@penjamin24seven365 , what do you think about it and would you continue reading it in your spare time? 
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Indigo_Not_Blue

I’m looking for feedback! So in your spare time could you look at this? https://www.wattpad.com/story/212766122

penjamin24seven365

@WEIRDO-DORITO the formating is a bit weird on Wattpad so there's something with that that might turn others off. 
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penjamin24seven365

@WEIRDO-DORITO I liked it but it's a bit too little to really tell if I would love it but I'm sure there will be another chapter to really see what's going on and get to know Alice a bit more
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Indigo_Not_Blue

@penjamin24seven365 , what do you think about it and would you continue reading it in your spare time? 
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