Homer_

@jespah Haha. Right now I set up a personal account to get the hang of things, and i will set up an author account eventually

Homer_

@jespah Haha. Right now I set up a personal account to get the hang of things, and i will set up an author account eventually

Homer_

Also, I will be doing seasons of the "Lens" haiku project instead of having it in one giant book (Makes things easier to manage). The first ten haikus of season 2 will be out on August 18th and I will be posting once again from then on. Haiku #224 will be the final haiku for the season. 
          
          Also, I will be uploading a new poem sometime soon. I don't know when, but I'll let you guys know. 
          
          I hope everything will be better from here on out. For the both of us!

DeadNightBird

Hey, thanks for suggesting me some of your stories. Right now my reading list is quite loaded, but I'll make sure to come back and check them out once I've got a free second. :)

Peculiarities

I forgot all the rules about haikus...
          
          Here to saying thanks
          for reading my new book
          and giving a (generous) vote
          
          Oh my god I suck....

Couzay

You whom seek favors,
            Sully naught the haiku wall
            Lest you mock thyself.
            
            Don't try so hard that you'd burst a nerve. Just chill.
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weary_

(Not to be weird or anything but I wrote a haiku. I've never actually written a haiku before and wanted an opinion from someone that knows what they're doing. Derp.) 
          
          Beauty passes by
          I forget to say hello
          now I am alone

Homer_

Your welcome
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weary_

Wow, thank you! That helps a lot. I'm not going to steal your haiku though, so don't worry. And thanks also for following me Xx
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Homer_

How touching <3, This is actually the first time that I am seriously writing haikus.  I really like how clear the message of your haiku is, but it lacks sensory information like touch, sight, taste, hearing. The first rule of creative is to show don't tell.
            
            Maybe something more like this
            
            Her soft hair floats, flows
            Hello booms in, mute outside:
             Now I am alone
            
            Hope this helps!
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Peculiarities

Thanks for following! And thanks for the comments, I love them! Anyway, so this is Meth, and I was wondering what should I call you since you have so many names, and all very special.

Homer_

Tristan. Call me Tristan, and your welcome for the comments and the follow :D
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