Emraldknight

I've been trying to not force myself too much to write in hopes that it'll help with my problem I mentioned a week ago but it's absolutely infuriating to me how long it's taking to get things finished

KhairulHafiz2

@Emraldknight  Take your time.
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Emraldknight

We're already 21 days into 2021 and we already have a Berserk chapter. Who knows, maybe we'll get 3 chapters again this year

Rookie-WP

@Emraldknight thanks, I'll go look into these myself and hopefully get my mind at ease after reading Blood on the Tracks/Chi no Wadachi..
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Emraldknight

@Rookie-WP The ones I would recommend are:
            ·Kengan Asura: A martial arts manga about fighters who act as representatives of different companies fighting in a tournament. Each character has a fighting style that no other person in the roster uses and the plot outside the fights is really good too. It's also written by the guy who does How heavy are the dumbbells you lift? It has an anime but I wouldn't recommend it except for it's music
            ·Voynich Hotel: It's a series that is built around a romance between a man from Japan who has come to the island for a reason you don't know at the start and a maid from the hotel he's staying at. All while also having a really interesting murder case also occurring at the same time. It's also really funny
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Rookie-WP

@Emraldknight most recently I've taken on 'Chi no Wadachi' so maybe I'll take a bit of a break from manga..
            
            But sure, what do you have in mind?
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Emraldknight

Any of you got any manga suggestions? I just finished the series I was reading and have no idea what to read now

Winter_Wanderer

@Emraldknight glad to hear it, I tried recommending romance books that were highly rated. 
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Emraldknight

Thanks! I just read a description of Gal Gohan and it sounds right up my alley
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Winter_Wanderer

@Emraldknight I’m not sure if you’ll like them or not, but here’s a list of my personal favorites. 
            * Kishuku Gakkou no Juliet (God tier in my opinion)
            * Akatsuki no Yona (Radiates reverse harem vibes, but it’s not a reverse harem)
            * Fechippuru ~Our Innocent Love~ (More specifically, chapters 1-73)
            *Gal Gohan (A bit lewd, but still a nice love story.)
            * The Story of a Girl with Sanpaku Eyes (Cute AF)
            * Kubo-san Doesn't Leave Me Be (Another cute AF)
            * Please Go Home, Akutsu-san! (Another lewd but cute love story)
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Emraldknight

It's a tragedy that sarcasm can't be expressed through writing well

KhairulHafiz2

@Emraldknight  Okay, now I seriously get it. Yeah, you should have just type in "I was being sarcastic" at the end of thing you're being sarcastic of.
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Emraldknight

@KhairulHafiz2 I like being sarcastic and I think it sucks that I can't be sarcastic when online due to the fact that sarcasm is harder to pick up on without being able to hear the tone of voice it's said in
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KhairulHafiz2

Actually, mind explaining what are you talking about in a nutshell so that I can understand?
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Emraldknight

As you all have seen, I've been failing to release things on the days I promised I would. Lately, when I try to write I have trouble building momentum and getting swept into my writing no matter how detailed of a plan I have. Plus, due to my stupid thoughts, I've been feeling like I broke a nonexistent promise and this is causing my anxiety to increase. I'll release the next chapter of Whims of Fate tomorrow then I'll be trying out not having set days for releases as long as I release three a week. Please put up with my mistakes and continue to enjoy my writing

KhairulHafiz2

@Quint_lover  You got a point there.
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KhairulHafiz2

@Emraldknight  I did also face the same problem like you, but I just keep doing whatever I can as long as the chapter or book is released. It's fine, man. Take the time that you need and don't put yourself into too much anxiety or else, your story won't go well.
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Emraldknight

I'm so sorry that I keep promising when things will come out and delaying it but the oneshot I'm working on is 1000+ words in and I still have a lot more I want to add so I'm going to have to release it tomorrow. Again, I'm so sorry that I'm not keeping true to what I said but I want to make this good and I don't wash to ruin this by rushing to the end of it.

KhairulHafiz2

@Emraldknight  Yeah, sure thing.
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Emraldknight

I definitely need to improve my skills at writing dialogue but please be patient with me because I've never been very talkative and I usually just talk when someone talks to me

Winter_Wanderer

@Emraldknight That’s just a little something called ‘Brain Being a Jerk’, in which the brain thinks negatively of your own work for the smallest reasons. The best way to put these kinds of thoughts is to change something in your writing style, personally, I just expand my vocabulary and use the new words in my chapters. 
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Emraldknight

@Winter_Wanderer The problem is just that I feel like the dialogue between characters is kind of lacking
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Winter_Wanderer

@Emraldknight Considering you’re starting out on making fanfics, your grammar and writing seems pretty good to me. 
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Emraldknight

Due to earlier trouble writing, it's getting really late where I live and I need to head to bed soon but when I wake up I'll get back to work and publish tomorrow and since it's 80% done I'll release the next oneshot tomorrow night. So look forward to Whims of Fate Chapter 6 - The Lovers and a Chika x Reader oneshot