I rely on criticism to further my writing technique.

Any suggestions for my works, please do suggest.
I'd appreciate it.

Apart from that, I'm 16, and I've a passion for writing.

I hate bandwagons with an arduous flame of indescribable abhorrence.
I hate badly written sentences/paragraphs, badly applied punctuation (or lack of), and tediously childish works. Anything that is well written, well punctuated, and overall a great read, I'll like, which will prompt me to vote and/or comment. Anything that is unsatisfactory to my tastes or general English 'standards' will be commented with supportive and constructive criticism, because I believe everything, no matter how terrible, has the capability to be better.
The most talented Captain can not sail the seven seas if he does not have an adequate sea-faring ship. In the same way, an incredible writer may not produce such capable incredible works without a good knowledge and application of proper and coherant English grammar.
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Duke_Benjy Duke_Benjy Dec 15, 2009 11:57AM
@Soul4148: I've read your work, it's quite deep. Write some more, much more, I want to see your true colours Dan ;D
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