BadBoiNaib

Oh my, cringe with my grammar :'(

BadBoiNaib

I wonder what you guys think about the plot so far? I need an opinion.

BadBoiNaib

@SierraLegends i will reveal each character slowly. Heheh
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SierraLegends

@BadBoiNaib Or is that suppose to be a secret or Naib was never introduced to any other survivors on Burke's side.
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SierraLegends

@BadBoiNaib I really like it so far! Keep going! One thing that confuses me(just my opinion) You know how Norton is on Burke's side, it would be helpful if Naib would remember/talked about any other survivors on Burke's side(If there are many more of them). So the readers could know who's on who's side.(JUST MY OPINION!!)
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BadBoiNaib

Thanks for the support and kind words. I'm so bad in writing  with a goo words but I wish you guys can understand my plot and story.