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0800 Hours [slash]

Social data: 35.1K reads. 1.9K votes. 337 comments.

Description: "0800 hours. It's been four days since I stopped going to school. Seven since the last teacher stopped showing up though, so I reckon there's not much point any more. My dad was raging - he thinks that teachers have a duty to their students or somet...

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You should update, like, it'd be the best thing ever. I mean, it's not like I'm having withdrawals from your amazing writing. Pssh, me, never! 
      
      P.s really missing 0800 hours 
AlyWasHere17 commented on Toto - Chapter 1, part 3


AlyWasHere17
"The world spun and Toto spun with it" - God, what a great sentence. It really underlines how disorientated and confused with the situation that Toto is. The section about brotherhood being more than trust was particularly poignant, and though he doesn't say anything, it's obvious that Toto's hurt that Sam has kept him in the dark. I like the way you explore this later on too - Toto wants to react, wants to lash out, but restrains himself. The little train of thought where he considers how absurd normal conversation would be in this scenario is a nice touch too. Despite all that's happened, Toto has thus far managed to reign in his emotions and be practical, and I'm interested to see if he'll be able to keep this up throughout the progression of the story.
      
      Cheers for another great chapter :)