searching for my heart

searching for my heart

591 Reads 213 Votes 15 Part Story
shalaka sawant By weaver_of_tales Updated Aug 30

PROLOGUE
  Seventeen-year-old Alexia was a normal girl.  She'd just moved to a small town with her parents.  She'd always been quiet, especially when it came to talking to boys.  However, things change when she meets Blake, a boy at her new school.  Everything about him screams danger, but she's still drawn to him like a magnet.  Can she protect herself, or is she going to fall?
Nineteen-year-old Blake was the alpha of the Blue stone pack.  For him, finding a mate seemed impossible, until he met Alexia. Although she's human, he felt the connection from the moment he saw her.  He was determined to break down her walls and make her his.

Hi guys. So this is my first story. Please let me know if there are any mistakes and please read further. I know the prologue sucks but I will try my best to give you a good book.

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                              Thanks for pointing it out.
                              I will correct it in the editing.
Hey, this is a really great start! I love how you included both perspectives, but maybe in editing add like "Blake's POV" or something, but other than that it's really good!
peterdoug3 peterdoug3 Aug 27
I like the set up for the universe.  It's already got a few original twists.  Nice!
parooxysm parooxysm Aug 30
again one more error .. its undited  i guess ..  good start tho :)
It's a really short chapter but it's  a good start. I love the fact that they have "mates" that are supposed to be only for them and that sounds really special ^^
Giselle_GSL Giselle_GSL Aug 27
Oh my good!! This book seems to be one of my favorites werewolf books!! Can't wait!!!