Salvation: A Light in the Dark

Salvation: A Light in the Dark

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Stacey L. Polishook By stpolishook Updated Apr 18, 2017

Contest entry for @TheCRYPTIC 's The HERCULEAN. Each of my entries for the various rounds are contained here in this book. Updates are coming....



Spectacular cover by @sugarcrystals !

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skematt skematt Jun 22, 2017
Integrating religious elements definitely makes the characterization a lot more interesting
A_C_Douglas A_C_Douglas Feb 16, 2017
Ahh, you're entering this as well? :D Best of luck! I know you'll make it through to the next round.
SkarlitDawn SkarlitDawn Feb 16, 2017
Awesome hook, Stacey! :) Good luck!
                              
                              P.S. one of the rules says the hook cannot be longer than  sentences and length doesn't matter XD yours has double that amount lol just a friendly heads-up :)
Alecc0 Alecc0 Mar 08, 2017
She certainly sounds like an interesting and layered character, nice attention to detail. Great hook about a woman appearing claiming to be who their religions preach. I look forward to hearing more!
Alecc0 Alecc0 Feb 17, 2017
Sounds great! Is there a version that is just 1 or 2 sentences too? Maybe it might sound cool with a short and powerful hook too?
IanRCooper IanRCooper Mar 08, 2017
After reading your protagonist Rachel, I can't wait to see where you will take Jemma. I'm rooting for you! :D