Spellbound

Spellbound

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Formerly: onurkneespls By MarcusAtley Completed

In the realm of Hesian there is Stavros, a detective who has made a name for himself as a dangerous, short-fused cambion; a child of an incubus and a human. Stavros neither wants nor needs a partner, but when the option is taken from him he is left with Elion, a young, cocky elf that knows exactly how to get under his skin.
Exhausted with the butting heads and heated exchanges between the two detectives, the Warden of the Force, Mikhail, takes matters into his own hands; leaving Stavros and Elion bound through magic until their lesson is learned.
With mounting pressures,egos, and jaded pasts hindering them, the two seemingly opposite partners come to realize that maybe the fire that burns between them isn't solely fueled by disdain, but by something more powerful than anything they will be forced to overcome.

  • boyxboy
  • cops
  • lgbt
  • malexmale
  • manxman
  • mxm
  • police
  • slash
  • supernatural
  • yaoi
smaoineamh smaoineamh Aug 04
This is tiny, but should it be "he wrestled the prisoner into the high security cell..." Leaving it as "in" instead of "into" makes me picture him wrestling the guy in the cell, instead of putting him in the cell.
Honestly he's sounding pretty hot from all these subtle descriptions your scattering throughout
smaoineamh smaoineamh Aug 04
Whaaaat this is an awesome beginning. Great characterization, and I'm already curious about the blood stained hand.
smaoineamh smaoineamh Aug 04
Stavros is cool so far. I'm intrigued. POV is throwing me off though. Are we in 3rd person omniscient?
smaoineamh smaoineamh Aug 04
I want to know more about this world. You're doing a great job introducing world building and magic systems without explaining too much to the reader.
ZebraLuv7 ZebraLuv7 Dec 26, 2016
Dang, I haven't gotten this into a book this fast in a long time. Such detail.😍