City Of Pearls

City Of Pearls

734 Reads 7 Votes 6 Part Story
Cammi<3 By wiseyoungwriter Updated Jun 04, 2012

Tabitha Jay thought she was just a normal teenage girl. Her Aunt was the most secrective person she knew.Until the day she entered the club Abbadon everything was going to change. dangorous missions, sexy, and suspense enter her life.She finds her past was not  as she thought and finds the one she was made for by the heavens or so she thinks . Will Tabby finally have a life she only heard in stories? And have the father that she hardly remembers?

ScandalousWithAD ScandalousWithAD Jun 15, 2011
i relli like it..a.a few errors here and there bt no biggie at alll......you jumped in very quickly which is excellent but also needs a bit more background...nonetheless..u.re fantastic and ure story says that 
Rachybab3 Rachybab3 Jun 14, 2011
I like it, but there were a few errors. Nothing too critical though. You also jumped into the story really quickly, but that's okay too :)
tayandjustinfan tayandjustinfan Mar 19, 2011
Write more it's really good. Wan to know what happenes !!:) thanks
wiseyoungwriter wiseyoungwriter Mar 11, 2011
@JesseT Thanks Ill take it into mind! i thought it was like that too!