The Lost Prince {Shadow Land Saga Bk1} completed/revising ✔

The Lost Prince {Shadow Land Saga Bk1} completed/revising ✔

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Stephanie Anne By _trapt Completed

Eliza Kindall has gone through many things - the death of her parents, being ripped from her world, and has suffered through the transition of magic to 'normal' every day. But when she's dragged back to the world she believed locked her out, she realises how wrong she's been. The King of Cadira requests her help in locating his son - at any cost. Her reward? Becoming the Queen of an ancient kingdom.

But an old enemy is ready to rise, gathering his demonic army in hopes of taking over the world Eliza yearns to know. With his powerful forces, Eliza is up against more than finding her Prince - she has to fight the evil magic that's spreading over the land.

With the help of a knight, Eliza's off for the journey of a lifetime, discovering more about herself and the world she was born in than she ever realised.

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[begin (rewritten) - 12 / 08 / 2014]
[finish (re-written) - 2 / 01 / 2016]

[Current Cover by: @lokiofasgard_]

Oh dear
                              Don't want anyone turning into fish, I guess!
                              Although I guess it's a good tactic if you want to get rid of someone without killing them... hm
I think you could say "no human chemicals" instead of describing what "human made" is ^-^
Maybe you could switch up the words here and show us that the man isn't there, rather than tell?
I have a terrible feeling something bad is going to happen to her grandpa D;
Centuries old? And I thought my grandpa had stories to tell! XD
xNikola-Gx xNikola-Gx Jan 30
Your writing is truly inspiring! I really love your concept of the magical world and how despite the topic normally requiring a lot of description , you kept it well paced.