30 Days To Fall In Love

30 Days To Fall In Love

48 Part Story 36.6K Reads 1.3K Votes
Lydia By lydiad55 Updated Jul 15, 2015

My friends told me that if you can't get a girl to fall in love with you after 30 days, either you're hopeless or she's not the one for you. I fell in love with Emma, and decided I had to make her fall in love with me... Little did I know how much of a challenge that was going to be.

HerbanLegend HerbanLegend Jul 18, 2013 07:35AM
I liked your descriptions a lot. They were great. Haha, the main character seemed pretty cool to me. I'm super gullible too, so I can relate. I think the story has potential and I'm sure it will generate a lot of buzz on here.
Critique: This is a great start! Really intriguing! You've got a good set of characters here and I could clearly picture everything. 
                                    
                                    I would only say read over it again as there are some supple spelling, grammar and repetition errors.
                                    
                                    Otherwise a great start, overall grade: A
lukeman14 lukeman14 May 24, 2013 01:45AM
Nice story idea :P I liked it, and normally I dont like these kinds of stories..... you know, because theyre..... whatever :P keep up the good work! Voting!
BookFlower BookFlower May 03, 2013 08:55PM
I like this story and I'm not joking! It is one of the best stories I've read! 
                                    
                                    I like the details you added to the beginning!
ambrosia_ ambrosia_ Apr 26, 2013 05:55PM
Awwww!!! He's adorable! There was no pauses in between and it gave me a clear picture of what was going on. Good job :)
Raniel_J Raniel_J Apr 21, 2013 01:10PM
This is such an amazing book and when I mean amazing I mean completely amazing! I loved how the description was eye-catching, it made most of the readers like me get all hooked up. I'm totally adding this in my RL.