Heather Baine is a young rebellious princess, determined to do what she wants and not what she is told. Her wish is to escape from the castle she is brought up in, but once she does, will she really find freedom?
This was an interesting first chapter. You're descriptive details haven't gone unnoticed;) lol. Anywho, this sounds like a great story in the making.
Loved the first chapter! It peeked my interest, *vote* let's go and read the next one!!
like spilledink said, this is a totally creative story and I'm already loving it(: the idea of this is really unique, and I definately think you should continue. amazing job so far! <333
A good beginning! (: I like your writing style, and most of it flows smoothly as well as the dialogue. Only a few grammar errors here and there. I like the story line, it sounds interesting! Great job, keep it up!
This is really good! I like the time frame you chose :D its different from most typical stories :)
@elevatormusic I thought locking her in the dungeon would be a bit too cruel... Even for Amandina.