CINDERELLA WAS GONE (EDITING!)

CINDERELLA WAS GONE (EDITING!)

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YHEAN By flameyeangirl Updated Dec 30, 2015

(UNDER MAJOR EDITING!)
"she's so sweet, of course-she's our daughter" her parents said proudly

 "She's so freaking genius-nobody doubted about that" they're all said in unison

"She's perfect" everyone adores her shouted

 "She's just rich, that's all" said people who pity over her

"She's extra ordinary-a really good fighter" her fanatics said excitedly

Inhaling deeply, she muttered "why do all people around me always say that?" she cried "I'M BROKEN" tears was gently fell in her face "why can't you all see that instead?" she added painfully 


[tagalag /filipino story written by flameyeangirl]

Rininrin Rininrin May 07
Waw. Pero di ko gets mwehehe. Ano siya magpapanggap na lalaki o magiging teacher? K.
bhosssss bhosssss Dec 22, 2015
Masyadong mahaba ang prologue mas mgnda din siguro kung tagalog lhat ..
ellejames ellejames Nov 21, 2015
Kapag brown belter ka na after 4 months pwede ka ng mag promo for black belt
zhaBiio5 zhaBiio5 Nov 06, 2015
maganda ung story kung ibabase sa concept. maganda ung idea sa prologue yet mejo magulo. ung grammar mejo bagsak at ung spelling din nung iba. though i know konting improvement mas gaganda tong story.
deemixley deemixley Sep 15, 2015
wait.  I've read somewhere else this story but the same plot but the difference is that she's rich!
scannermalabanan scannermalabanan Sep 04, 2015
be careful with the his and he's and your and you're. nice plot tho! ;)