Eternal Grand Quest - Watty's 2017

Eternal Grand Quest - Watty's 2017

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Theodore By Theodore21 Completed

~ #13 in Adventure November 2016! ~
Eternal Grand Quest, a well received MMO that is being played the world over. A virtual reality game, where after putting on a helmet you become the hero and are allowed to explored Fantasia. 
  
  The game is well known for it's  engaging battles and realism. You can get hurt, tired and even ill. Pretty soon you may even begin to question...what's Fiction or reality?. Just as one player is doing right now.
  
  Arion, known as Tema in the game, dreams of finishing the game for its grand prize. After the simple gesture of escorting an in-game character called Alise...
  things start to get strange. 
  
  Alise shows strong signs of being human, bosses and other character acts of their own accord...and Arion even begins to feel the effects of the game...carry over to real life. Is Arion simply imagining things? You'll have to see.
  
  A Sword-Art-Online inspired story that blurs the line between reality and fiction. 
  This is a new Story so tell me what you think.
  
  Cover is done by JosephGross
  Copyright © 2013 | All Rights Reserved | T.Mullaney Theodore 21

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The constant repetition of Arion does this is alittle... eh...
You can use he/she, her/him dont just say a nme like Tema...always tema!
Nolsba Nolsba Oct 16, 2016
You forgot the massive in  massive multi-player online (MMO) Also u confused race (human, featherppl, elf...) with classes... (Huntsman, huntswoman)
                              Also sentence caps and punctuation. ._.
                              Otherwise aside from that and some confusing words like lifeline, nice story!
CurruptAngel CurruptAngel Jun 20, 2016
The way this is written started out sounding like a game guide book, but now seems more like a forum where other players are explaining it.
RaphyyStoran RaphyyStoran Aug 18, 2015
Personal opinion i don't really like the claseses x) but don't take it wrong
King_Chaos King_Chaos Jan 19, 2015
I think you made a mistake here. 
                              It should be Sheena reacted.