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Your Love is My Drug

Your Love is My Drug

4.1K Reads 99 Votes 17 Part Story
Jennifer By Jenniheartchu Updated Feb 09, 2012

Let's say you have two bestfriends they're sweet funny and l o v e a b l e. Like literaly. How would you choose? Spencer finds herself in that situation with Kyle and Jace. Things are getting serious and stressful. All three with have good times and bad. Heart breaks and passion. Hate and love. Jokes and games. But who will end up being Spencer's drug?

PurplePantsPower PurplePantsPower Feb 11, 2012
This was interesting. There were a few grammar/spelling errors such as something you put 'his' instead of 'he's' and 'rising' instead of 'raising.' Also, the punctuation on the dialogue needed some commas if you are continuing with 'he said happily,' etc. Otherwise, good job.
Whines8 Whines8 Feb 11, 2012
This is really good. I voted and will vote ahead of time for your others and add this to my library to read later today great job
BlurryWords BlurryWords Feb 10, 2012
This was a really great start. I think it's perfect length, you include just the right amount of information for one chapter. Your dialogue is smooth and realistic, I really like it! Good start :D
dear-shay dear-shay Feb 10, 2012
this was really well written. you stayed in one tense the whole time, and i couldn't help but give you credits for that because its hard even for me to stay in one tense, :)
hisracingheart hisracingheart Jan 27, 2011
LOL. My Dad is the same!!
                              You clearing have a talent! Carry on writing :) 
                              Voted XxX
hisracingheart hisracingheart Jan 27, 2011
Jace seems interesting... LOL. I will just read on....
                              Thanks so much for dedicating this to me!!! I voted!! XxX