Army Strong (ON HOLD)

Army Strong (ON HOLD)

10 Part Story 3K Reads 66 Votes
C_Lina By C_Lina98 Updated Jul 13, 2012 01:03AM

Jackie had a great life, but will joining the army throw that all away? And will a injury ruin her dream of serving her country? Follow Jackie through the ups and downs of her journey through the army. PLEASE NOTE I AM NOT AN ARMY EXPERT AND CORRECT ME IF I MISUSE ANY TERMS OR GET SOMETHING WRONG

It's a nice start. There are some mistakes but nothing to big. It's a little short, even for a prologue, but it's a good one. You created a tension in the end, so the reader will want to read more about this. That's really good! 
                                    Love, Jade
C_Lina98 C_Lina98 May 30, 2012 12:01AM
@JakeBurkhardt thanks!!! But I can't believe you didn't read it, I was freaking out! Thanks for having so much faith in me! <3
JakeBurkhardt JakeBurkhardt May 29, 2012 11:55PM
I loved this!! I read it Friday but I felt like makeung you panic so I pretended to read :)<3 You need to stop doubting yourself you are really good writer!!!! It was like pulling teeth to get it out but you did and it was good! Stop being shy you are goood at a lotof things wonder women ;)!
C_Lina98 C_Lina98 Mar 13, 2012 10:32AM
Ok, I'll check it , I'm also starting to write Fantasy and Reality again. So check that one out to. My other book isn't that good.
tigerlily1d tigerlily1d Mar 11, 2012 02:42AM
Yeah. I'm writing CHANGE. It's a Harry Potter Next Generation Fan Fiction. I'm also writing Fearless, but right now it has a bunch of scribbles so don't read that yet.
C_Lina98 C_Lina98 Mar 11, 2012 02:40AM
@tigerlily11 ok!! I will be waiting haha. Thx a lot!! Ill check out your books, did u write any?