Evangaline

Evangaline

243 Reads 18 Votes 1 Part Story
Phillipa By MissPippa Updated Feb 13, 2012

No one crosses the fence. No matter what. No one wants to see the ghosts of the Big House. The scary ghosts that wear gowns and frilly shirts in the bright sunshine. The one's who walk around with parasoles and pet dogs at their feet. The Lady with dramatic curls in her hair and several women following her where ever she moved. And the Lord. With his horses and his men... No one crosses the Fence 

Eve and her little sister Kelly go to one of the biggest parties of the whole year. But as Eve - a social queen - goes round partying, Kelly - the more quiet, nerdy one, partys even more!  The highschool King, Sean takes an interest in Eve and makes his move in a game of Spin the Bottle. But what Eve doesn't know is when she chooses Truth or Dare she is also choosing the two different ways her life could change forever.sean dares her to fross the fence and run up and touch the Big House. But will Eve accept?

LauraClark7 LauraClark7 Nov 18, 2015
Loving this first chapter! Well written concept, just be mindful of consistent tenses: will be vs was. Overall, cannot wait to read more!
Blindinglights Blindinglights Feb 15, 2012
vampires + historical fiction + romance + drama = me in love :D
Aturtleslove Aturtleslove Feb 15, 2012
Totally going to be an epic story ^__^
                              Can't wait to read the rest
                              Voted!! :)
ByeByeBitch ByeByeBitch Feb 14, 2012
Historical fiction isn't on of my favorite reads but vampires are. I like how you have included enough information for the reader to get the story and I like the detail you have added.
EternalRest EternalRest Feb 14, 2012
Really great first chapter! It's unique and interesting, seems like it could become a really great story! Voted! :D
topmonster123 topmonster123 Feb 14, 2012
I really like and mostly history stuff are becoming evil! I love it!! Voted!