Definitely brought tears to my eyes and I can really sympathize with her lack of trust and fear of letting your guard down. Yes it is a great start to the story and caught my attention perfectly!!
I read this yesterday, but I thought I'd come back and comment since you were so nice to comment on mine :)
Phil really does sound hot, I hope this isn't too good to be true for Billy! (Love her name, btw. My old childminder called her daughter, Billy!)
Yea! Then we're officially friends! =)
Yeah, I noticed most of your strories are paranormal or fantasy. Of course, I think it's non-fiction, but eh-- whatever the non-believers think. ; )
@emiaaqueenz It's different from my other stories...but my plots in all my stories are different. King and Commoner is different from Prince of Darkness, and like that, RHS, is different from both of them. I still hope you enjoy it though!
@emiaaqueenz Ooo! I count you as a friend too! :D XD I hope you enjoy it!
Good start so far! =)
I love the idea of this story, but I've never actually read one with this type of plot. I guess since you're my friend (at least, I think of you as a friend) I figured I'd try it. And I like it! =D