Roman High's Stars

Roman High's Stars

112 Part Story 230K Reads 5.5K Votes
Carmen T. (칼멘 티.) By Kyeire Updated Feb 02

New Story! Yay!
    
    >>>>Song of the chapter: Because of You by Kelly Clarkson>>>>
    
    >>>>Pic of the Chapter: Dan Pierce played by Joel Edgerton. With a mustache. >>>>
    
    Chapter 1
    
    So cliche for a story to start like this, but hey, it's the start of my story. I'm the new girl in town...yeah. Moving in with my stepfather, Dan, on Miller Lane. Why? Because he became my legal guarding just a few short weeks ago.
    
    I can't say I'm happy, but at least it beats staying with my abusive father. I thank god that he was caught. I mean, it was so hard to catch him, but one slip up after three years, and he's behind bars, safe away from me.
    
    "So..." My step dad started as we drove into the driveway of his house. "I've been preparing for you to come."
    
    "Okay." I got out and slung the plastic bag--which held all of my personal belongings--over my shoulder and followed him to the front door.
    
    As he unlocked the door, he turned to me, and the look on his face clearly showed he was very uncomfortable. "I, um, ...

Alaeryel Alaeryel Sep 29, 2014 08:21PM
Definitely brought tears to my eyes and I can really sympathize with her lack of trust and fear of letting your guard down.  Yes it is a great start to the story and caught my attention perfectly!!
AuRevoirSimone AuRevoirSimone Oct 13, 2012 11:33AM
I read this yesterday, but I thought I'd come back and comment since you were so nice to comment on mine :) 
                                    
                                    Phil really does sound hot, I hope this isn't too good to be true for Billy! (Love her name, btw. My old childminder called her daughter, Billy!)
megqueenz megqueenz Jul 15, 2012 11:56PM
@Kyeire 
                                    Yea! Then we're officially friends! =)
                                    Yeah, I noticed most of your strories are paranormal or fantasy. Of course, I think it's non-fiction, but eh-- whatever the non-believers think. ; )
Kyeire Kyeire Jul 15, 2012 10:59PM
@emiaaqueenz It's different from my other stories...but my plots in all my stories are different. King and Commoner is different from Prince of Darkness, and like that, RHS, is different from both of them. I still hope you enjoy it though!
Kyeire Kyeire Jul 15, 2012 10:56PM
@emiaaqueenz Ooo! I count you as a friend too! :D XD I hope you enjoy it!
megqueenz megqueenz Jul 15, 2012 10:54PM
Good start so far! =) 
                                    I love the idea of this story, but I've never actually read one with this type of plot. I guess since you're my friend (at least, I think of you as a friend) I figured I'd try it. And I like it! =D