Family R.O.O.Ts

Family R.O.O.Ts

638 Reads 17 Votes 5 Part Story
Adrian Michael Johnson By AdrianMRivera Updated Jul 08, 2011

When Hinai Usaki prince of Mendella must leave on an important mission, his apprentice, Pein Yagasouri must follow in his steps, Uniting a broken team to overcome a world drowning in regrets and chaos. Recognizing his own trials, and short comings, learning to better control his powers to reach his full potential. On the way making new friends, dueling with old enemies, and finding out about a brother he never knew existed.

Anahlynn Anahlynn Jun 06, 2011
I love how you describe growing up in the first paragraph because it's true. I wanted to be a baker, a model, a ninja, but then I realized that it would take a lot of work to do those things and I was like, "....yeah, not gonna happen," though I still wish to be a ninja..... (=
beach_bum6000 beach_bum6000 May 06, 2011
thats sounds pretty cool,..i like adding in elements of folk tales and such,.my story im working on now "the summer i met charlie" is going to be adding in some major irish legends! lol
beach_bum6000 beach_bum6000 May 06, 2011
i love the very beginning where you are saying when people are growing up,..and then you say how your starting to grow up and its not a pleasant experience. 
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AdrianMRivera AdrianMRivera Jan 24, 2011
@samanthafury Thank you very much i'll will try to fix that up a bit at some point. Not trying to confuse anybody. :)
AdrianMRivera AdrianMRivera Jan 21, 2011
Thank you, I will most likely be posting the second chapter sometime this weekend.
AdrianMRivera AdrianMRivera Jan 20, 2011
Thank you so much, I can;t tell you how good that makes me feel.