Claimed by the Desert

Claimed by the Desert

202K Reads 9.3K Votes 21 Part Story
Katrina By Katrina_Crane Completed

Vera is a young archaeologist with a determination to prove herself in the field. While on a dig with her father, they happen to stumble across an ancient ruin that releases a jinni through a doorway between the worlds. Out of naivety and sympathy, Vera befriends the ancient creature only to realize the dark, nightmarish truth behind classic fairy tales of the Genie. The jinni's fascination with her quickly turns into dangerous obsession.

Soon mangled bodies begin turning up all over desert and Vera has no clue how to stop it. When the jinni begins to posses her friends and threaten their deaths, Vera finds herself desperate to end the madness.

Ooo, great cliffhanger ending! I love your voice, keep writing this story please!
nicolefoster61 nicolefoster61 Jul 10, 2016
Wow, I must say I'm impressed. This story pulls me in and i've only read the first chapter. And the way you describe things and objects is amazing! I feel as if I am there myself. Keep up the good writing! Can't wait to start with chapter 2!
ValeriBeatrix ValeriBeatrix Jun 03, 2015
i smell trouble! Your writing has improved a lot. My only criticism here was the use of the passive voice. I am definitely excited to see who that snake is :)
ValeriBeatrix ValeriBeatrix Jun 03, 2015
@Katrina_Crane ok good!!!! I love the premise of of this. I want to write something in this genre, but I have to work on my world-building...that and I never seem to have clever concepts for supernatural stuff!
ValeriBeatrix ValeriBeatrix Jun 03, 2015
I want to read this!!! Should I wait until you finish editing?
Facebook_Freak Facebook_Freak Aug 14, 2014
This is the second time I read this story XD I just love it so much!