Don't Cry When You Say Goodbye

Don't Cry When You Say Goodbye

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Adrian Michael Johnson By AdrianMRivera Updated Feb 25, 2011

Friendship is the only mystery left in this world, at least that's what I think. That there are actual bonds out there strong enough to surpass emotion. But isn't friendship just part of love, an emotion in itself? I wish I could understand these humans. Are they really that foolish, or maybe it is me that is foolish. That it is me that has lost my way? Friendship is the only mystery left.

NatSlight NatSlight May 26, 2011
Hey great chapter! Love the name Benvolio, very original. The story moved quickly and that's great to keep a reader's attention.
                              
                              Just one thing: We were seven(;) seven..., seven... (it's less confusing by adding the semicolon in there)  ;)
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crazychic23 crazychic23 May 02, 2011
the whole story was  great n feel feel freee to look at my storie comment and become a fan n u should write moree
AdrianMRivera AdrianMRivera Apr 29, 2011
@InspireMe @CharacterDevelopment @sabby4me Thank you guys, very much, it means a lot.
AdrianMRivera AdrianMRivera Jan 31, 2011
@PaigeChapman @Astragalus  Thank you very much, and I know, for some reason the thingy on my computer I have doesn't have spell check or anything. So i always seem to miss something. :o
AdrianMRivera AdrianMRivera Jan 29, 2011
@xer0blaze Thank you very much. @samanthafury i'm 15, and that's just wonderful, I posted a bio on the characters if you'd like to check it out.
xer0blaze xer0blaze Jan 29, 2011
wow you have really great descriptions and character dialogue is great. keep it up!