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Immune (Featured)

Immune (Featured)

32.6K Reads 2.6K Votes 31 Part Story
Amy Johnson By AmyJohnson895 Completed

"I live in a place called Compound 4. We are one of ten different compounds placed at strategic locations around the US. It's been thirteen years since the virus overtook humanity, turning about ninety percent of us into zombies. I'm not sure how it started exactly; that's classified information. I do know that in order to save what was left of the human race, the president at the time took a bunch of really smart people and kids and relocated them into new 'protected' cities. My father was one of those really smart people. I was only five at the time, but I knew what was happening."
  Within the walls of the compound, Jay makes stupid mistakes, mistakes even she doesn't understand, putting everyone inside at risk. All because she can't shoot someone. All because she misses the wind in her hair, the flowers on the hillsides, the sound of crickets at night. All because she's different, the only person untouchable by the Virus. 
  When the mistakes begin to duplicate, and a girl shows up who knows her name, everything begins to change in Compound 4.
  Highest rank in Science Fiction: #9

JaxonBlacc JaxonBlacc 3 days ago
He makes it being Immune like a bad thing. And that's the problem with name calling. Sometimes it turns a good thing into a bad one.
KQuilligan KQuilligan May 13
Nooo I love Solitaire and Chess and Checkers. I'm loving this story so far:)
JaxonBlacc JaxonBlacc 3 days ago
I don't know why, but when reading this paragraph, I kept hearing Clarke's voice (From The 100). And it's a good thing.
This is a lot of information all at once, but it doesn't feel the least bit info-dumpy. Nice job!
You must put the - instead of " when someone's going to talk
Ok so sorry I don't like to be all critical or whatever, but didn't it say twenty years in the description paragraph? Cause I read that and I'm pretty positive that this is the same one but it says 15 years instead