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My Immortal (On Hold)

My Immortal (On Hold)

857 Reads 10 Votes 12 Part Story
Isis By remember_who_you_are Updated Dec 14, 2011

Sasha Olive is struggling through an abusive break up when she meets Lance Remington. A beautiful, mysterious boy. As she travels deeper and deeper into his world,she starts to spiral into a wonderful world of blood, beauty and believing. But when evil gets in between their love, everything starts to fall apart. There are no more goods times or memories, just pain and survival. Come with Sasha and Lance on their journey of tough love and dedication.

remember_who_you_are remember_who_you_are Jan 25, 2011
Thanks =) I do tend to make things go a little fast with my writing when I don't know what to write about haha.
x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Jan 25, 2011
Nice job. Its a good story, and I like he last line. I've got to agree with Sasha, it does move really fast, though. Keep writing !! (:
                              
                              -jamiee
                              :D
x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Jan 25, 2011
Wow, great detail ! Really intense, and leaves the reader wondering whats going to happen next. Good job, voted !
                              
                              -jamiee
                              :D