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Karisma [ON HOLD]

Karisma [ON HOLD]

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Amber By Star_catcher37 Updated Mar 20, 2011

The Lady Karisma went missing years ago when her home was ambushed. Rumors had been flying everywhere, "Did she die?", "Did she escape?" And mostly, "where is she now?" They don't know that she has been in the woods all this time..
 Runaway, Outcast, Troop Leader. What is she now?
She survived. She is Risa. She is Strong.

Star_catcher37 Star_catcher37 May 23, 2013
@NancyParsons2 Oh wow this story is old. It's on hold (and has been for quite some time) but I rather like it and probably will finish it at some point :P
                              Thanks for reading and especially for commenting!
                              I'll edit this soon :D
NancyParsons2 NancyParsons2 May 23, 2013
Great story!  Just a couple of comments:  don't refer to yourself in both 1st & 2nd person.  (I like your use of 1st person!)  And  run a grammar check - that's the best way to catch those small errors  that plague us all. ;)
DeathlyAuthor DeathlyAuthor Mar 24, 2011
@Star_catcher37 could you return the fav on my book to read it? just remember its still in editing
Star_catcher37 Star_catcher37 Mar 24, 2011
@EricaStanciu @strugglinwriter Thaaaaaaank you for commenting!! You are both AWESOME!!! :):):) :D 
EricaStanciu EricaStanciu Mar 24, 2011
your work is really great. I hope you continue to keep writing because I look forward to it. :)
Star_catcher37 Star_catcher37 Mar 18, 2011
@alissende Thanks for the advice! I'll edit it... Sooner or later! :):)