The Aberration (Completed)

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Merve By XxMinnowxX Completed
(The Liberation Trilogy, Book 1)
    Sandar takes a huge intake of breath and faces me with a pleading look. He’s asking me, non-verbally, to help him. Help my grandfather. Help the world.
    “So you’re basing the fate of a whole population on the survival of one man?” I ask. It must sound crazy, surely, even to his ears!
    “Yes, it so happens that we are.”
    She lives in a time when appearance means everything; when brown eyes are the key to survival, and dark hair is the only normality. A time when having any other eye colour means certain imprisonment - or even death.
    The world is governed strictly. It is all for their own good, they know, and no one dares question the authority of the government. Having any eye or hair colour other than brown is abnormal; it is an omen of extreme bad luck and death. Those who are born with anything other than brown hair or eyes are called Aberrations. It has been a decade since the last known human without brown eyes died, and no one has been sighted having any abnormal eye colour since.
    If you have the misfortune to be born as an Aberration, you will be taken away from your family, to a place no one returns from; a poor, defenceless child thrust into a world that is both cruel and filled with conflict.
    Her name is Auriella Vanhanen, and she is a blonde with grey eyes.
I'll have to read this at some point. So behind on my library haha
                                    But every vote counts and you're so close to a thousand so I'll give you your votes in advance ;)
Nice opening, written in omniscient, not that that's a big problem for prologues.
@JustClick, gracling? I think it's different, like I guess they relate to death and eye color... But I don't see it, well I guess I only read the first chapter so...
This seems like a great story, I have only read the first chapter and I'm already hooked!:) Love it!
This story reminds me of The Giver, but with a twist. I really like it, and I'll be reading more :)
Omg Gorg! its AMAZING! i thought it was about time i was a good friend and read your story, especially since you finished it! xxoo