S.M.A.S.H (ON HOLD)

S.M.A.S.H (ON HOLD)

2.3K Reads 97 Votes 7 Part Story
Caroline By XxamoraXcarolinexX Updated Jun 07, 2011

April is not a normal girl, her parents are famous. She doesint know her talents like her mom who is a model,singer and actress and her dad who is a manager and record producer ,one day she decides she wants to be apart of her parent world so when her dad tells her that Splat Records needs some knew talent she gets an idea....
read and find out what the idea is

EmilySophieRose EmilySophieRose Jun 09, 2011
This is good so far, a few spelling and grammar errors, but that's pefectly normal. Keep up the great work :)
helloimbailey helloimbailey Jun 09, 2011
I think it's really good! I'm gonna keep reading! Voted! Check mine out (:
LovinYoooooh LovinYoooooh Jun 07, 2011
its really good(: the only thing you need to fix is you have a  looooooooooooooooooooooooooooonggggggggggggggggg run on sentence in the first paragraph and a few spelling issues, but other than that its really good(:
dustclears dustclears Jan 27, 2011
Good luck for the watty awards!!!! is is an awesome story =D
Dream_Girl Dream_Girl Jan 26, 2011
hey! thats a pretty nice start:):)
                              hope you do get this in the watty awards:):)
                              xxxxxx
XxamoraXcarolinexX XxamoraXcarolinexX Jan 25, 2011
@moo-im-a-pig i want a blackberry curve but my dad says its not gonna happen