A vampire's slave

A vampire's slave

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FantasyGirls By FantasyGirls Completed

Silver remembers only one thing about her father, the fact that he gave her up to a slave house. She wasn't sure how long she stayed there, the only thing sticking with her was the cruel treatments. At first she was happy to get out of the place, but when her new master happened to be the newly crowned vampire king she wish to be back at the slave house.
This man though gave her a feeling that she had never felt or heard stories about, and it wasn't only fear. She begins to discover new things about herself that had once been hidden away from her, locked deep within her mind.
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So there is a lot of grammatical errors and if you let me I would love to point them out so you can fix them while I read but I won't do it without your permission
angelkobe angelkobe Oct 30, 2015
Throws her in the TRUNK??!!damn cheap date.at least he opened it for her lol, :p
GothGirl22639 GothGirl22639 Jun 21, 2015
Hey would up stop for an std? Isn't that the opposite of what most do?
silvernamie silvernamie Jun 14, 2015
woah.. that last line was totally unexpected.... I was expecting some "she was traumatized" or something... 
                              You're really great in writing.. the scenarios that you write gives me goosebumps.. its really a great story.. I hope you keep in writing and inspiring people through your work.. :-)